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My day for Play
Contributed by
BRONZEN
on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:15:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I sit and stare out of my windows
the full bloom of the day is appearing
The leaves on the trees are swaying
wet from the morning dew
People are hustling and bustling on their
daily route
The coffee is freshly brewing its the means
to my start
The shower is running warmly ready to ease
all my tensions
Im taking a few minutes to meditate and talk
to God for a minute
There has to be more to life tiring of this daily
staple
Adventuring my days for once so Ill have some-
thing to bring to the table
Im grateful to god for the life he breathes into me
everyday
But there has to be something more than work
and home
Maybe Ill just go out on a whim and be spontaneous
and find my play
Copyright ©
BRONZEN
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2006-06-11 16:15:26]
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Re: My day for Play
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:41:52 PM AEST
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| Nice, I really enjoyed the pictures you pa9inted, especially in the first half. I really liked this. Good job! |
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Re: My day for Play
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 11:12:00 PM AEST
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nicely put..I and many others, can certainly relate-
B. |
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Re: My day for Play
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:00:32 AM AEST
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wow,
don't there enuff words to express the wisdom in this write.
Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My day for Play
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:31:08 AM AEST
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Work is certainly essential, but so is play, as you have reminded us with this poem. It makes me want to leave the office and take the rest of the day off....Nice write.
Butch |
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Re: My day for Play
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by KarlaMarie on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:06:18 AM AEST
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very nice!
KarlaMarie |
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