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''Please Read''
Contributed by
bloodbeckons
on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 09:41:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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"Please Read"
Red ribbons around my neck
sway me left and sway me right
it wont change anything
I didn't put much of a fight
that was my last step
and with a few short snaps
i lost all feeling
At last darkness and serenity!
I'm sure when you find this
you'll sob and scream
but just know that you were my last thought
Take me down easy
and make sure i don't fall
please don't cry too much
Bury me in the mountains
you know how i love the woods
I'll be with you always i swear...
Love your sweetheart xoxoxox
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bloodbeckons
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2006-06-11 21:41:32]
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Re: ''Please Read''
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 12:49:14 AM AEST
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thats really sad.
i hope you didn't go through with it. |
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Re: ''Please Read''
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 03:46:43 AM AEST
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Well I hope this is just a write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: ''Please Read''
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by catz77 on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:58:09 PM AEST
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i hope this is just a poem you decided to write
no ones life should be taken early
this is a good poem though i have to admit
catz
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Re: ''Please Read''
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by brew on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:34:43 PM AEST
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Awful and tragic, Is it true?!
THis is something NO ONE should ever have to see, or bare.! So sorry, but hoping this is a poem maybe felt from something that you heard.
Sad write
Brew~ |
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