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All of You
Contributed by
irodethetrain2u
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Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:33:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your Eyes:
Stars of the most beautiful kind
Drops of silvery-blue sapphire
Suspended in the darkest heavens of my life.
Your Lips:
Sweep accross my skin
Like two soft, pink rose petals
Floating in the wind.
Circling and stopping. Circling and stopping.
Your Body:
An ocean.
And I,
the ship caught in your storm.
Twisting/turning
Your waves crash over me
Pulling me in
Deeper and deeper
Until,
I drown.
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2006-06-12 14:33:46]
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Re: All of You
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by robbig60 on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 04:04:38 PM AEST
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| hey thanks for the nice comments on imagery in my poem. Hardly a rival to this though... beutiful |
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Re: All of You
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by bluestars on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 01:28:50 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, l really liked the ending |
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