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CUT
Contributed by
simmi
on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 04:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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CUT
WAT COMES 2 UR MIND WHEN U HEAR THA WORD CUT?!
U PROBABLY THINK OF GETTIN A PAPER CUT WHEN DOIN UR HOMEWORK OR GETTIN CUT WHEN U FELL OUT DAT TREE AS A KID
THOSE R THA LAST THINGS DAT COME 2 MA MIND WHEN I HEAR
CUT
I THINK OF DAT RAZOR SLIDEN DOWN MA RIST
U MAY NOT LIKE DAT THOUGHT OR PIC IN UR HEAD
"C-U-T"
IT MA WAY TO ECSCAPE WEITHER ITS FOR 2 MINUTES OR 5
WHEN I CUT I LEAVE ALL DIS DRAMA ALL DIS PRESSURE ALL DIS ****
EVEN FOR A MINUTE ALL MA PROBLEMS JUST FLOAT AWAY ITS LIKA A HIGH DAT FEELS SO GOOD BUT WHEN I COME BAQ DOWN FROM DAT HIGH I LOOK DOWN N SEE WAT I HAVE DONE AND IT ONLY MAKES IT WORSE
I CUT
NOW ALL MA PROBLEMS R GONE BUT NOW ALL I GOT RUNNIN THROUGH MA MIND IS
IS SOME1 GONNA SEE
MA FRIENDS R GONNA FIND OUT N NOT TALK TO ME
OMG AM I GONNA B PUT INTO A MENTAL HOSPITAL!
WAT IF MA MOMS FINDS OUT
ALL I DID
WAS CREATE MORE PROBLEMS FOR MYSELF BY CUTTING I DO RELIZE DIS YET I KEEP GOIN BAQ AND DOIN IT AGAIN N AGAIN N AGAIN
I CUT
ITS JUS WAT I DO
I CAN STOP 4 A WHILE BUT I JUS END UP DOIN IT AGAIN N IM SORRY
I CUT
N HALF THA TYME I DONT KNO Y OR ITS 2 COMPLICATED TO EXPLAIN BUT
I CUT
I KNO DAT MOT MA FRIENDS MAY WORRY OR FEEL BAD N SOME MAY NOT CARE
BUT IM SORRY DONT TAKE IT PERSONALLY I MEAN I LOVE EACH N EVEY 1 OF U BUT DONT WASTTE YA TYME WORRIEN BOUT ME I DONT THINK NO1 CAN HELP ME BUT IF I NEEDA TALK LET ME COME 2 U
THANX FOR CARIN THOUGH
I CUT
U MAY NOT LIKE IT BUT I CUT
WIT WATEVA RAZOR TACK KNIFE GLASS PUT DAT SHIIT ON MA WRIST N CUT DATS MA HIGH
I CUT
N IM REALLY SORRY IR I HURT U BY HURTIN ME
I CUT
N DATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY BOUT DAT!!
Copyright ©
simmi
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2006-06-14 16:00:41]
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Re: CUT
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 06:14:46 PM AEST
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hello,
i dont really have a comment as i was unable to read this due to the fact that it is hardly written in english...i would love to read it though, if you decide to post it again...in english!
wizard |
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Re: CUT
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:20:50 PM AEST
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I concur with wizard..
(though I feel ya pain)
you might get more feedback from the likes of those, who might actually help you with your struggles, if only they were able to respect your work.
I myself, find it near impossible to do that with words like: "THA" ... "EVEY" ...and "N"..(??)
It is after all..'poetry'
..show some respect for the craft...and for yourself as well.
Sincerely yours-
Billy..AKA..Man On High |
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Re: CUT
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:37:50 PM AEST
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i agree with wizard,
its hard to understand with the lack of complete english words, and it being in caps...
KarlaMarie |
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Re: CUT
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by brew on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 09:48:15 PM AEST
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Words that are used are used from within..yet.......How and who can understand.?! I guess YOU can, and ONLY.............Um dont do what you speak of.......its BAD>! PPl........dont need this way out
Find one which consoles ya, and the inner, not this,
Brew~ |
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Re: CUT
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by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 02:16:30 PM AEST
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i could not agree with wizard and everyone else more. this would be a fine piece of work if it was easier to understand.
i am going through the same feelings. an i know i would have loved this if it was written better.
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Re: CUT
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:07:40 PM AEST
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| Horrible poem...nice concept but horribley written....maybe you should take away the caps and speak english |
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