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A Token of Anna Marie
Contributed by
fielding88
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Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:36:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Her watchful presence stole my heart
"I love you, Anna Marie"
Before I let the words depart
her eyes had answered me:
"Hush my darling," our gaze met,
"Words are but a safety net,
Don't drown me in cliches, instead
see beauty in what's left unsaid."
Engagement ring left in a glass
of wine my loved one sips
before another word could pass
her fingers gently touched my lips:
"Hush my darling," her touch meant,
"Words are but a message sent,
while all the world would see us wed
see beauty in what's left unsaid."
It seemed a month she'd been away
"I love you Anna Marie"
the words that would not let her stay
her sweet voice said to me:
"Hush my darling, for I must go
Words are but a seed to sow,
A vow can strike the moment dead,
there's beauty in what's left unsaid."
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Re: A Token of Anna Marie
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by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:44:26 PM AEST
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WOW! This is an amazing write. Damn I could visualize the entire conversation and the person sitting in a room thinking back. This is great. I love it...
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Re: A Token of Anna Marie
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by candysears on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:36:47 PM AEST
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Very good write...I love it this piece..
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Re: A Token of Anna Marie
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 11:16:48 PM AEST
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| This is a very good write!! |
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