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Broken
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
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Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 07:29:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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piece of glass,
lost in the sea,
sallowed by the sea,
open ,
broke,
broken clouds
only to pour out rain,
Crying shame,
no reason,
i dont want to feel like this way forever.
the music of a broken window,
open,
broken,
twilight world of black and white
there are no colors.
i dont want to feel with way forever.
sallowed by the sead of crying raing,
only casting shame,
like siloghts,
Crying rain.
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fake_emptyness
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2006-06-15 19:29:35]
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Re: Broken
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by chulysnacky on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 08:10:58 PM AEST
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I read your poem,but It doesn't make sense...
keep writing. |
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Re: Broken
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:28:14 PM AEST
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it makes sense to me, and yes, i know that feeling...hope it gets better for you...but if it does it might be temporary so...excuse my pessimistic remarks, great write.
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