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Mirror
Contributed by
xxpinkhunnixx
on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:49:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I look in the mirror and what do I see
I see a girl who isnt me.
She looks so happy, so free from care.
I glance again, cant help but stare.
It isnt me, not who I am.
I see it now, its all a scam.
Outside, I pretend to be,
The person everyone expects of me.
But inside Im screaming and breaking apart.
I want to escape this pain in my heart.
If only there was a reason for why,
I feel this way, for wanting to cry,
Then maybe I would stand a chance,
In being the girl I saw at a glance.
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xxpinkhunnixx
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2006-06-16 10:49:20]
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Re: Mirror
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by Alison on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 11:52:41 AM AEST
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| being yourself is one of the hardest things to do, dont ever give up! great write with good feeling in it! |
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Re: Mirror
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 11:58:39 AM AEST
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| Very, Very good, I do understand what you are saying. I have felt this way myself sometimes. I wish for thee love. |
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Re: Mirror
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by bronzen on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:23:40 PM AEST
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| very good expression and it flowed |
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