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Hush
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Destiny dances her evening moves
Stretched out, from secret night's arms
Showering purple love at cupid's bay
Walking me, to your sentient doorstep.
I dwell in you on warm drunken hollows
Watching you move in east's fire-nights.
I find my rhythm in your ancient calls
As time dusts off my still paper-life
I watch you move and I hear summer sigh
Sighing with me in hush old moments
Burning mystique-wants into my blue space
Burning coal-needs into my universe.
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2006-06-16 22:48:09]
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Re: Hush
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:58:40 AM AEST
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Oooh, this is a little different.
It sets up quite the atmosphere. I could fall into the words of this poem, they weave together so well.
I think it's a good write that everone can take some thing from, and find their own meaning.
Great write,
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Hush
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 11:01:24 AM AEST
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| nice write i enjoyed reading |
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