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Pull me down
Contributed by
KarlaMarie
on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 10:06:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Her last word to me
Is the same as the first
The word
Sings to me
As a lullaby
Beckons me
As a mother should
She pulls me down
With her I go
Lower than earth
She screams
Spite her worth
We put her there
I put her there
Under the ground
As her last word sounds
Ringing in my ear
My heart and mind
I watch her stone
Etched with her name
Cold and gray
Her decaying corpse
Beneath me it lay
Day comes and night falls
Life returns to all
Yet she remains
Her memory remains
She
In my memory lives
Then she
Dies again
And again
Her last words
Are etched in my flesh
Her last act against me
Death marks me
Death owns me
She remains my master
I her slave
Her last breath
Uttered no freedom
Only reinforced my chains
Bound to her life
Now to her death
She created me
My body and my soul
My life was because of her
I put her under me
Her rotting flesh and bones
Her death was my gift
She fell
After I pushed
Her final scream
Her final curse
My throat closed
I never will tell
How she made me this
How she made me hers
She pulled me down
With her last word
Mine
KarlaMarie
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KarlaMarie
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Re: Pull me down
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by wizard on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 10:15:07 AM AEST
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that was such an incredible write...i guess i may be missing something about the message. its seems to be obvious that its about the death of mother...perhaps you're saying that after her death, you've become even closer to your mother..let me know.
anyway, i htought this was excellent!
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