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Just Blue
Contributed by
candysears
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Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 02:54:27 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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I awaken this morning down and
Blue,
My heart is blue and fragile,
Its killing the very core of my
Soul,
Draining all essence of life
From me...
Picturesque of blue...
My soul illuminated from the
The half moon..
Presenting silhouette of my soul
Optical illusions,
Realization I precede from my
Heart,
I am withering away.
My soul is like a ghost,
Neither here nor there, just
Faded into darkness that
Hatred brood..
Deception and deeds of
Malice...
I awaken this morning down and
Blue..
Such arrogance smug approach
Shutting me off from the light,
While virtually destroying my
Soul,
My soul crave serenity..
With love that blooms in time
Of all season...
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Re: Just Blue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 04:39:34 PM AEST
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Such deep sadness, candy. I believe a lot have awakened
to this kind of desolation. I hope you are feeling better
at having put pen to paper.
Time has a way of also giving way to hope and the
chance for mornings that are much kinder.
Exquisite write!
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Just Blue
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by poet_in_waiting on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 09:57:06 AM AEST
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i never pictured blue quite like this, it's a much darker blue ..
good write |
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Re: Just Blue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 08:04:38 PM AEST
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Lovely poem candy, says so much in so many ways, gently speaking from the heart.
the last line is a gem. Most touching.
Ben |
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