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21 questions
Contributed by
Shyne
on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 10:07:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Floetry As I write a simple melody Me, I am poetry Flow with me down the river stream As you ask me 21 questions A questionaire 21 questions of what you ask and what I manage to share What I mention is rare The time it takes for me to answer those questions In the nick of time of my confessions One am I virtuous, like a piece of art Two am I witty, pretty, and smart Three do I struggle with commitment Four, Five and six do you put me in easement Seven, eight, and nine do I consider myself a dime Then I left because I felt I didn't have time But then I turned around and begun to think Ten, eleven, and twelve asked me what is there really to rethink Thirteen through twenty do I believe in love at first sight Twenty through twenty-five asked If I really believe in love because you were falling in love tonight Then I began to laugh My poetry is to strong to be broken unto that path I will not fall for that line This must be a sign....................................
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Re: 21 questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:19:27 AM AEST (User
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Well crafted and confident 'stream of consciousness' poetry, although there is a giveaway structure and thematic resonance that characterises classic rap or beat poetry. Clever girl.
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