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Wasting Away
Contributed by
Skippysam0r0n123
on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 10:54:57 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Wasting away,trying to make something of your life,
Oh whats that? You finnaly stoped begging for me to take you back,
Calm down, take a break you take on way to much weight.
Feeling so closed up, You not even sure your still making sence,
Trying to find something to do with your day, Mooping around
everyone asking "are you okay"?
Dont you wish they would just go away.
Trying to find a commond ground some thing that is not so strange,
Dont you want to be "normal", is what they say.
No happen to i find "normal" Incretably lame.
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Re: Wasting Away
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by a7x36 on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 01:21:09 AM AEST
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| typos took a lot from this poem, and it wasn't that good to start w/anyway, it's too random and the rhymes aren't good |
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Re: Wasting Away
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:28:26 AM AEST
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Well, I suppose you have to start somewhere... :)
You'll do better next time.
~Davinah~ |
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Re: Wasting Away
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by myselfindreams on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:27:08 PM AEST
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| ok, who is taking the time out for the begger here. normal, sounds to me, like, someone is to great for a body |
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