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Terminating You
Contributed by
lady_daisy
on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 02:59:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Sink your demonic fangs into this
So how about it?
Ive sang halleleuiah before
true! never I lie!
So, give me a reason not eliminate you
here and now.
Come at me,
and youll be the one
bleeding for our sins!
Ill watch you bleed, whilst I pray.
Ill sit in my golden chair,
with a cigarette!
Isnt it oh so familiar now?
Alarm bells are ringing!
be off with you now!
Follow your road
that which is full of forgiveness!
Watch myself burn with pain
just out of pure pleasure.
Sick and twisted fantasies
amaze your virgin mind,
excellent.
The future flashes before you
you sit in your domain
Obliviously happy.
You loiter about
unaware of the ignorance
that is feeding off of you!
you go about your days
unaware of this materialistic world
in which you have helped created.
So I beg of you!
Stop breathing!
Im feeding from you!
You fuel my fire...
red hot!
So give me salvation
and I bet you, Ill abuse it!
I am disturbed
I am tattered
I am ripped and
Torn apart
And youre the cause of it.
So, how are you feeling?
Copyright ©
lady_daisy
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2006-06-20 02:59:29]
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Re: Terminating You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:21:58 AM AEST
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| Comment deleted due to offensive content. - Moderator_16 |
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Re: Terminating You
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 04:29:12 AM AEST
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Well, Well, aren’t we a little angry. I am glad I am not on the receiving end of this one. LOL Take care.
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Re: Terminating You
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 05:07:15 AM AEST
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Well, I liked it and I don't give a toss about the stanza structure... :)
As far as I'm concerned; there are no rules... Art is about the FREEDOM to create in any way you want. We have to abide by enough rules in this world already.
Keep up the good work!
~Davinah~ |
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Re: Terminating You
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by Lucid_Tides on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:16:46 AM AEST
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| The best way to express your emotions without having to make contact with another, I feel it is a good write, keep it up. |
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Re: Terminating You
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by myselfindreams on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 11:51:57 AM AEST
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| wonderful images |
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Re: Terminating You
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:52:26 AM AEST
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Yes there is no rules
awsome piece of work
keep it up |
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Re: Terminating You
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 06:17:22 PM AEST
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some of your lines stopped the flow and i have to agree with black on Tuesday on this poem
it is a good way to let out anger
-red hot!- did you really need that part
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