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My Cup Of Tea
Contributed by
candysears
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Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 01:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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On this hot summer day I wish Cooler temperature I never wish for much.. Only a Cadillac SUV, As large as it comes.. WHY? To protect me from all the Accidents I seem to acquire yet, None seems to be my fault But it hurt anyway Lying on hot concrete seem to Burn my backside.. If I walk around the park.. It drains me of all my body fluid And I crave for cold drinks Than I sweat more.. Drink more and fill the Fluids moving around in my Stomach, I sweat, sweat In the temperatures of 99 and Over 100,plus.. Blisters my poor wanton soul.. Flowers In the hot summer heat, but the Flowers blooming dose not seem To mind As long as you quench their thirst To keep their roots moist Planted in miracle grow will keep Them thriving well, In this suffocating heat... It will bring out the best in your Flower bed More Comfortable.. In the season of fall and winter I Seem to be my happiest, while winter Weather brews the cold wooing Biting wind Frost on the windows seem to please Me.. The snow filled lawns and sidewalks Seem to be my cup of tea Southern Arkansas.. Usually miss the beautiful winter Morning.. And wooing of the cold winter Beautiful nights.. I enjoy the big flakes of white Falling from the lake filled Sky. White flakes glitter, sparkling Light, Shooting from each beautiful Flake As the big yellow moon rise Each flake, Laid to rest in a cluster of Beauty Spark with their blues, Yellowish light, capturing Every color. Displaying each flake Craved as a work of art.. Tapestry of.. Fall and winter is my cup Of tea... I Adore this winter land of Beauty...
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Re: My Cup Of Tea
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 09:57:44 PM AEST (User
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and i adore this poem. it's nothing short of a murel of vivid perfection. lovely writting and
expressing the voice of the heart.
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Re: My Cup Of Tea
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:28:12 AM AEST (User
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Falling from the lake filled
Sky….
White flakes glitter, sparkling
Light,
Shooting from each beautiful
Flake…
As the big yellow moon rise
Each flake,
Laid to rest in a cluster of
Beauty…
Spark with their blues,
Yellowish light, capturing
Every color….
Displaying each flake
Craved as a work of art..
Tapestry of..
Fall and winter is my cup
Of tea...
I Adore this winter land of
Beauty...
I just had to throw this whole part in my comment; it is written in a wonderful, and catchy way; I love that! No matter what, the grass always seems greener on the other side, doesn't it? I like the way you wrote this in its entirety, and the feeling comes across unusually strong for such a topic...another thing I particularly enjoy about this piece. Very nicely done!
Scorp.
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