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Placid Thoughts
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:38:56 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Quietness and peace , tranquil moods,
Ease my worried mind,
Transport me into outer space,
Where the sparkling stars do shine,
The peacefullness and solitude,
Being weightless and far away,
The big moon smiles down at me,
Before the break of day,
And when the sun rises,
In the sky of deepest blue,
It gives to me a warm glow,
And contentment that is true,
My worries now seem distant,
No more will they make me sad,
For the beauty that is around us,
Make me realise I should be glad.
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jerseysue
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2006-06-21 02:38:56]
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Re: Placid Thoughts
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 03:46:30 AM AEST
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This is a very pretty piece. Very calm and relaxing to read. I like the feeling of it and the way you so gracefully put your words together.
~Lo |
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Re: Placid Thoughts
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 05:25:20 AM AEST
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| Beautiful Sue, it does give a feeling of of calm.. brilliant xxxx |
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Re: Placid Thoughts
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 05:22:34 PM AEST
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Sue~
A gorgeous and most precious piece of poetry that soothes the heart and calms the soul. I love how ur words flow so gracefully.
The mood u set is so beautiful & tranquil.
I thoroughly enjoyed this magical piece of poetic art. You go girl! Keep up the awesome writing.
warm oz hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Placid Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 09:05:33 PM AEST
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What a beautiful, heartwarming, and touching poem you have here!!! They're more than "just thoughts". They're lovely thoughts and you express them very well.
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Tim
:-)
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