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fear the attack
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 06:05:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Fear the attack
She blends in splendidly
with her strips
in the swamp grass.
Fear the attack
she creeps ever so slowly
she is soundless
with her slyness.
Fear the attack
of the majestic tiger
with her strips
with her slyness.
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2006-06-21 06:05:05]
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Re: fear the attack
(User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 06:20:26 PM AEST
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its a good write
but dont you mean stripes
that confused me a bit
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Re: fear the attack
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by Lucid_Tides on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:30:14 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem. It keeps the reader thinking, puts a good image in my head of the tiger's actual attack. It's slyness. Interesting piece. |
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