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The Old Woman
Contributed by
Mixed_Emotional_Girl
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Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:22:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everyday I saw an old woman Rocking on a chair Here face was pale and wrinkled And there was grey in her hair
She looked at me with regretful eyes And I couldn't help but stop and think What's happen to this woman That's made her body shrink?
I greeted her with a smile And a nice friendly "hello" Everyone says she is sad Because of a man named Leo
Was he a loving son? Or man that she had wed It doesn't matter, when I think of it My hear still filld with dread
Why do I feel this way? Did she do something wrong? Does she know she has done something And hidden it fot this long?
What ever she has done she must be very brave To manage to take the secret To her earth filled Grave
Copyright ©
Mixed_Emotional_Girl
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2006-06-21 11:22:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Old Woman
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:37:57 PM AEST (User
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A sad but a very nice write...
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Re: The Old Woman
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lilbabe on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 09:05:43 PM AEST (User
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Wow...it kept me hanging on every word, wondering her secret. Great poem,
lexy |
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