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My Tears of Mud
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
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Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:47:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You asked what I feel within,
Vitalic hunger clawing at my skin
My only quintessence now impure
You ask why I'm marked and not simplectic
I have cuts down my arm and I'm dying, hectic
Belittled before they could find my cure
You ask me why I feel this way
I've been scorned and the pain seems to stay
O' my fatal insecurity pushing you away..
Es ist Sie, den ich liebe
Clawing at my eyes - they bleed, unclear
So these tears would not flow today
Finding myself alone is my only fear
I never want you to go away
My vanity, it shows through blood
In vain I cry, my tears of mud
Here I carve the bane of life
Meine Risse Schlamms
May I ask why you portend my pain?
And you ask why my blood drips like rain
Within my hyaline eyes you stare..
There's no visible answer
To why the cuts remain
Narben sollen dort bleiben
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Re: My Tears of Mud
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by a7x36 on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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| i like how u use a foreign language in ur poetry, even though i have no clue wat it means, it adds effect, ur big vocabulary helps u write meaningful, new rhymes, good work |
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Re: My Tears of Mud
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by bluestars on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:30:17 AM AEST
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Wow, a very powerful poem,
I love it, great job |
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Re: My Tears of Mud
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 02:24:23 AM AEST
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I admit its a very powerful write
good job on this |
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Re: My Tears of Mud
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:57:16 AM AEST
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A powerful, deep and emotional write. You are a talented writer who can convey their thoughts very well. I love the way u have used the foreign language and blended it well with ur poem. a superb job. Well done.
best wishes to u always,
`*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: My Tears of Mud
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by Lady_Daisy on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 04:50:19 AM AEST
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| Your words are so beautiful. I love the foreign language, perchance not so foreign to you? |
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