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Who I am
Contributed by
auura
on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 02:24:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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who i am
is where the secret lies
truth be told
through my own eyes
for a story too dark
shall not be told
who i am
is too dark to hold
for deep inside
a demon exists
it hurts my pride
it controls my fists
I hurt the ones
i love the most
and upon this demon
i make a toast
I closed my heart
to let no one in
and upon that oath
my story begins
~~this is who i am~~
Copyright ©
auura
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2006-06-22 14:24:29]
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Re: Who I am
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 02:49:28 PM AEST
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| Who you are does not count, but who you want to be. This is very deep and slightly sinister. Let the Demons out, you did this in words. Sue x |
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Re: Who I am
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by Davinah on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:27:24 AM AEST
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| I guess we somehow all have our own demons... |
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Re: Who I am
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 09:24:45 AM AEST
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A good dark write.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Carol |
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