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The fading of ones open Heart
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 08:56:26 PM in AEST
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Careless Whipers, drawn from within
Does the one "dare" to make that un controlable leap for thee>i>
Keep in mind the heart takes the controlable urges
The head says ...No, yet it is the "simplistic" urge, and feel...
Have you chose the correct...
Have you chose the worse
ONLY the eyes can tell, and it takes seeing, and not just looking
Maybe this heart has NOT done all and is scared for many reasons
Failing
Falling
Hurting
Only time with all....Will tell.
Now breath: Count.... and keep , Smiling.
The rest is up to, time.
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brew
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 09:09:09 PM AEST
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oh this is powerful dayna and yet compeling and even more so fragile. i was mezmerized by it's delicately place emotions so well written and better conveyed. A real treasure
very enjoyable to read.
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 10:02:25 PM AEST
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| Very nice Brew |
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 10:40:55 PM AEST
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wow very nicely done
i really like this piece |
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 11:47:09 PM AEST
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nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 11:58:18 PM AEST
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Very good work.
huggs,
emy
so true. |
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:12:37 PM AEST
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there's a lot more here, than the words on the screen..
and so, I hope time is kind to you my friend~
As always..
Billy |
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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Introspective defering to "time". Just like ya say, don't fade, smile. Great write.
wabl
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 01:28:28 PM AEST
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Dearest, sweet, Dayna,
the title sets it up for me and yes, time certainly
is all telling. I hope life is kind to you, dear friend.
A most intriguing and compelling write.
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 05:22:47 PM AEST
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Dayna~
sweet girl, I feel as if there is alot more to this my dear friend. A most interesting and compelling write penned by a very extraordinary and special Miss. I do hope that time is kind for you dearest Dayna~
love n hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by englishprincej on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:24:23 PM AEST
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Very interesting write, as always.
Is your love for the person fading away as times slips away ?
If you can't overcome fear then how will you avoid failing and being hurt........there may be someone to catch you.. |
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Re: The fading of ones open Heart
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by RLWildPassions on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 03:41:01 PM AEST
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Brew... my friend.. sincerely.. a piece awesome to perfection.. My pen is dripping ink through my veins eyes.. pounding out liquid understand of how outstanding a piece this you are to this write... your poetry is beautiful in your writer way, always unique.. It truly met to my heart...and.. mean from the begin to end. Great going and keep go... RL
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