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''In This Universe''
Contributed by
calforinagirl
on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 10:58:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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If you planed to converse
I'm olny able to terse
In this universe
Do you really understand
I live on unforgiving land
In this universe
This is my compremise
I hope you relise
In this universe
My life is what it is
My reasons not his
In this universe
Reasoning i understood
I know i could
In this universe
This is me
I hope you see
In this universe
Nothing changes
Encluding me!
IN THIS UNIVERSE
Amber Dawn Humbert
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calforinagirl
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2006-06-22 22:58:37]
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Re: ''In This Universe''
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by Davinah on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 06:26:35 AM AEST
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Very nice!
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Re: ''In This Universe''
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 04:25:01 PM AEST
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| this was good but i have one question do you know what terse means? let me know and another things not all poetry has to rhyme i try to do all the time but it is better not to. well let me know talk to ya later |
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