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The Cuts of Fall
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:08:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I was found beyond her door
Laved in Blood, it fills the floor
I'm alone again..
Another Scar, Another day
O' my weal, it fades away
As my life descends
Do you see now?
As this firmament breaks
And she looks adown unto me
November seeking
And Fall's blood still leaks
Earthbound, I fall to weep again
Fall was found on the shore
Embracing the sights of nevermore
Caress the fallen angel's face
A funeral, an empty space
I feel her caress upon my face
As I fade again
My blood ran cold
As my body wilted
Whence this room I lay, uncurably, Dying
I'm too blind to see now
Why her love leaks in blood
unto my face, it stains
Where pleasure once ran
Through her crystaline eyes
Causing her never-ceasing heart
To stop with her cries
Where her odyssey led
would bring her to her end
and stop her in her tracks
Where her vanity dies
In the shadows
Lurks a lonely soul
And her silke Mourning Cry
Whilst in the shadows
Roams the fluorescent aglow
That no one dares to follow
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Lucid_Tides
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2006-06-23 09:08:19]
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Re: The Cuts of Fall
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by a7x36 on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:46:15 AM AEST
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| very beautiful and very sad, reminds me of the song "eulogy for an angel" by From Autumn to Ashes |
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Re: The Cuts of Fall
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:16:06 PM AEST
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| nice write. i really enjoyed reading this poem. its sad but a great read. i look forward to more! also thank you for your comment. i really appreciate it. |
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Re: The Cuts of Fall
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 01:19:34 AM AEST
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beautiful yet sad i really like this write
good job |
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Re: The Cuts of Fall
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by wizard on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 09:10:33 AM AEST
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awesome write...nicely done!!
wiz |
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