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If I Said Irony
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 11:01:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Awake from this dream of eternity
I opened my eyes for you
These years have gone by so fast
and there's nothing left for me to lose
I'm coping with tepid memories
And I can't go on like this
You're words begin to remind me
that death is bliss
I close my eyes-As I Melt
Just to find-my unforsaken heart
To believe you and me can not be
In perfect harmony
Now that my eyes are open
I focus them upon you
It seems my heart's been broken
There's no one left to accuse
I close my eyes-As I melt
Just to Find-My severed heart
When we first met, There were heavens in the sky
Lights so bright, you'd never think it would die
Now the lights are gone in this fading memory
When we first met, it was never meant to be
To believe that we used to be
In perfect harmony
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2006-06-24 11:01:52]
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Re: If I Said Irony
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 12:10:40 PM AEST
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so very sad, but a nice read, as many sad poems often are. good write,
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Re: If I Said Irony
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:56:39 PM AEST
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I absolutely love the way u have written this sad, but magical piece of poetry. U have an amazing way of been able to express ur inner thoughts and feelings so well. May u find someone who shall be worthy of ur love and heart real soon.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: If I Said Irony
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 01:47:34 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem, it flowed very nicely. Reminded me of such memories I've had. good work. Take care, Kimberly |
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