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Missing You
Contributed by
-xhaleyx-
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Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 03:06:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Missing your scent
Craving your touch
A few weeks apart
Is not reallty much.
I long for your hugs
And seek comfort in your eyes
How long will this last,
this feeling i despise.
Just A few more weeks,
and I'll see you soon
I've just felt so lonley
during this emotionless month of June.
I'll be ok,
but so much better once your here,
My heart does not ache,
But it wishes you were near.
Im thinking of you,
and I hope you of me.
My heart is locked tight
But only you hold the key.
Summer is almost gone,
I can already hear your voice.
When i see you, you'll be hugged.
So fast and so much, you wont have a choice.
I miss you undoubtly
so much i cannot explain.
Being apart for a little while
Will help our love maintain.
I couldnt let you leave
Without you knowing I love you so much.
And I'll be missing your scent
And deeply craving your touch.
Copyright ©
-xhaleyx-
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2006-06-24 15:06:02]
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 06:58:22 PM AEST
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Sweet. A very beautiful and loving ode to someone
you miss [obviously very much].
I love how emotion-filled it is. Just lovely.
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Re: Missing You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 12:39:56 PM AEST
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it rhymes! i love that...i can't rhyme. i wish i could rhyme.
this is awesome...i think your best one so far!
- Bethani - |
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Re: Missing You
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by ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 08:32:14 PM AEST
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lovely crafted - just right for the feeling of this poem. like it.
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