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Her Gift
Contributed by
MachineGunBarbie
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Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 07:38:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Such crimes committed
So many congested moments
the blinding love, so vivid.
He took her away
Blew her mind,
settled in her brain.
All I do is stand aside
cross my fingers,
and ease her pride.
She holds herself with worry on her face
What's done has been done
but too much to erase.
There's so many hours with nothing to say
Because none of my words
can take this away.
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2006-06-24 19:38:03]
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Re: Her Gift
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by wizard on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 10:02:12 AM AEST
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very nicely done!!
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