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Life

Contributed by darkscorpio on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Light the candle, but youre burning it at both ends
Now youre on fire, from lack of sleep and loss of friends
Just a zombie, mindless in your daily deals
No time to think, work so hard you can no longer feel
Your stress and pain, is my loss and gain
Life is only getting harder
You can be mad at the world, and I dont care
Always whining that life is never fair

Always p***ed, cause you feel you can not breathe
Open your eyes, dont waste your energy as anger seethes
I see your eyes, exploding in internal rage
A workaholic, trapped inside a goal filled cage
Learn a lesson, enjoy life, cause you only have one
Life is a chore, sometimes a bore, if you never have fun
Your loss and pain, is your depressions gain
Life is getting so much harder
You can be mad at me, and I dont care
You try too hard, now lifes not fair

I warned you, ***** up and headed for a fall
Sometimes, I dont know who you are at all
Empty shell, whats left of what you want to be
Angry, bitter and blind to all reality
Your goodness fails, is your coffins nails
Life is only getting shorter
You can still be mad at me, and I still dont care
Too busy crying lifes not fair

Look before you leap, and all that other crap
Instead of believing in something youve become a sap
Always worried about others ability
Instead of building your own respectability
Life is a series of war, against yourself and man
Put all that bulls**t aside, and do the best you can
Channel your rage to results, keep the system in check
Or self hate and pity will be the noose around your neck
Your whining ways will lead to darker days
Life is only getting shorter
You can be mad at me and I dont care
You use me as a crutch
That I just cant bear




Copyright © darkscorpio ... [ 2003-02-08 22:20:00]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 01:22:42 AM AEST
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very good message and structure. I liked it a lot.




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