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distance
Contributed by
iLOVEthisKID
on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 12:56:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you hide your emotions so wel
but your faith is borderline
for someone with a broken heart
your face sure seems to shine
desparate for you attention
begging for a second glance
it seems the fate of our rejections
has given me another chance
your undercover sensitivity
gives me security that you care
you were always my silent partner
when no others were there
i know it must be so hard for you
an absolute uncontrollable destiny
and now you wont talk, youre afraid to get hurt
but the silence, it crushes me.
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iLOVEthisKID
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2006-06-25 00:56:41]
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Re: distance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 11:57:23 AM AEST
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A most insightful peice of writting, as though the heart is keeping a vigil on an unprictable
thing called love. Some time 2 say nothing is the most revealing of all thruths. Very perceptive peice of poetry.
Ben
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