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LOVE
Contributed by
Dalnik
on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 07:28:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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LOVE
WHAT IS IT?
LOVE
DOES IT HAVE FEELING?
LOVE
DOES IT HAVE PAIN?
LOVE
DOES IT KNOW MY NAME?
LOVE
DO I KNOW YOUR NAME?
LOVE
DOES IT LIVE AND DIE?
LOVE
DOES IT CRY?
LOVE
DOES IT HAVE LIMITS?
LOVE
WHAT IS IN IT?
LOVE
IS LOVE A FEELING
LUST, PAIN, HATE, SORROW
WHAT IS LOVE?
SOME THINK LOVE IS GREAT
SOME THINK LOVE IS HATE
SOME THINK LOVE IS PAIN
SOME THINK LOVE IS GAIN
SOME THINK LOVE IS SORROW
SOME THINK LOVE IS LUST
LOVE
IS WITH OUT LIMITS
IT HAS NO BOUNDARY
LOVE IS
LUST
PAIN
HATE
SORROW
LOVE HAS NO CONDITION
LOVE ONLY COMES BY FULL SUBMISSION
LOVE IS ALL IN ONE
LOVE IS NOT ALWAYS FUN
LOVE IS JOY
LOVE IS NOT A TOY
LOVE IS LIFE AND DEATH
LOVE IS WHAT GIVES YOU BREATH
LOVE IS TO SCOLD YOU
LOVE IS TO HOLD YOU
LOVE NEVER LEAVES
LOVE ALWAYS GRIEVES
LOVE IS COMPASSION
LOVE IS FOR EVER LASTIN
O K
LOVE IS NOT A MOMENT OF PASSION!
LOVE IS SOMETHING GIVEN
NOT SOMETHING DRIVEN
AND
NOT RETURNED
LOVE, IS NOT SOMETHING YOU CAN EARN
LOVE, IS SOMETHING YOU CAN LEARN
LOVE
WILL MAKE YOU FEEL
PAIN, HATE, SORROW, LUST
BUT
TRUE LOVE WILL NOT ALLOW YOU TO ACT TO THEM
JOY, IS YOUR REWARD, SELF CONTROL
TO SUBMISSION OF LOVE
LOVE
TRUE LOVE
IS ALL ABOUT SOMEONE ELSE
AND
NOT
YOUR SELF
Copyright ©
Dalnik
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2006-06-25 07:28:55]
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Re: LOVE
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 03:51:04 PM AEST
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I was not sure where you were going with this or if I cared much for it till the very end.
TRUE LOVE
IS ALL ABOUT SOMEONE ELSE
AND
NOT
YOUR SELF
Very well said.
~Shannon |
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Re: LOVE
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by a7x36 on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 11:52:15 PM AEST
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| good message, but poorly presented, i think your rhyme scheme is pretty corny at times and a lot of the lines are cliche |
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Re: LOVE
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by bluestars on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:33:25 AM AEST
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| Good poem |
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