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Confessional
Contributed by
keilantra
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Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 09:24:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Ive got the golden key
Its in my hands,
Youve got the music,
Youre leading this dance
You move soft and slowly
And Im easily on my knees
This room is my confessional;
Muttering prayers and pathetic pleas.
The story is familiar
Youve told it before
Between moments I cant remember;
My tongue was too sore
And my eyes as well,
From crying you songs;
This would end all over the floor
And I knew it all along.
Every time your eyes flashed
They seemed a little darker
Each note was painted over me
In magic marker
They revealed more than music
They showed you my soul
I was a symphony once
Until I was left without the pieces you stole.
Ive got the golden key
The door is only four spins away
But the music that youre whispering
Is begging me to stay;
And the dance youve got me tangled in
Barely leaves time to breathe
The floor is loosing its balance
And I dont think I can leave.
Youve got the moves to make me crumble
And Im easily on the floor
This room is my confessional
And I cant handle any more.
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keilantra
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2006-06-25 21:24:18]
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Re: Confessional
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by wizard on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:32:44 PM AEST
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awesome write, kei...i love this!!
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Re: Confessional
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 02:35:59 PM AEST
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| You have a real flow in your poems too kei! Totured and sentimental, yet delightfully succint. Great poem. |
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