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What If
Contributed by
CalamityAna
on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:26:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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What if I
Was just like you?
What if I was ten thousand years old
and in the corner of my eye
I still saw you.
What if I
made love to you?
Would you shudder become unhinged?
Would you gasp
At the syringe Instilling a mixture of passion and confusion,
Veins green with tonic
Smiling into the meeting of my thighs.
But what if I
was just
like
you?
Copyright ©
CalamityAna
... [
2006-06-26 00:26:52]
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Re: What If
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:40:08 AM AEST
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| abstract is right, i don't understand it at all, read it 3 times and still don't get it |
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Re: What If
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by Davinah on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 03:03:23 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Good write!
~D~ |
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Re: What If
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:48:35 AM AEST
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very interesting write on this subject.. i enjoyed reading it.. it was quite different but i liked the flow thanks for sharing
JENNITTUDE |
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