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Bye Love
Contributed by
BlueEyedTerror
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Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:49:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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It all started one day with a boy and a girl
Who told themselves they loved each other more then the world
The girl told her friends, the boy told his friends
Times couldnt get any better, they wanted to see each other again and again
The boy thought the girl was beautiful, the girl thought the boy was cute
They were together, as one, they put the rest of the world on mute
Then times started to get shaky, and the two started to crumble
The two were on different pages, confused, everything was a mumble
Eventually, the girl had enough, and she ended the bond
And just like that, the joy and the happiness the two had, was gone
For no apparent reason, but they were torn apart on this path
The boy didnt know what to do, he lost his smile and his laugh
But the girl didnt seem to care, she didnt show it on the outside
The girl told her friends that she didnt like him anymore
The boy told his friends that he didnt like her anymore
The two kept wandering along, thinking and thinking about each other
And how in the past, they were so close to one another
They use to giggle, they use to adore the littlest of things
They had so much in common, they shared the same joys and the same pains
The boy still thinks, what could have been with him and her
If the girl hadnt been so fast to pull the trigger and kick him to the curb
The girl said she was confused, so she just had to, but the boy was confused as well
The boy to this day, couldnt get all his emotions out, if he went insane and yelled
The girl doesnt know, but everyday the boy goes without her, is a living hell
Minds can be weapons, and the boy has one, and he doesnt know how to use it
The girl dropped their relationship, felt worse then green day music
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Re: Bye Love
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by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 12:08:22 PM AEST
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Very nice last line! Isn't love a pain?!!! I liked this, it's unusual (in fact, possibly unique) with a nice narrative and delivery. cool,
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