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GROW
Contributed by
chaos78
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Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 04:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Walking in the dark with no light
but at the end of every tunnel
there a bright light
I know you got to crawl first then walk
but sometimes you got skip that
because you hate to get push back
and you don't like to feel trap
wanting that old life back
know I 'm just confess with no
one to turn too wanting to end it all
for I hate to lose but I still got more
to look forward too so I got find a way
to move and hope for a better future
come true but I can't stop thinking of
you and know I must learn to grow with
no food to feed my soul just got to let go
and find another way to grow so I can
live to be old before the darkness
consume my soul
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chaos78
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2006-06-26 16:01:13]
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Re: GROW
(User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 07:02:14 PM AEST
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| a few spelling errors..and some grammatical issues to tackle..but other then that, if you can get past that..this is a brilliant write....it truly is..your talent shines...;) |
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