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Forever my Darkness
Contributed by
deadclown
on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:57:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Inside my world of darkness I feel every emotion born in my grief I try to touch it To take it out and replace it with something more beautiful
I want Something I can give to others Something that would in return make me smile Knowing I was responsible for giving an abused situation some hope
I try this each day I really do I try but my unforgiving darkness takes over each time
I don't want pity I don't want pretentious concern or prayers that belong to the good All these things I do not need
This is not why I chose to write these words By doing this I am asking for nothing nothing
I don't mind if I recieve no emotion from those that decide to read my grief I don't mind if no comments are placed below my frustration These things I do not mind
This is how I feel
To you I am a stranger so there's no need for compassion You may feel nothing for these words You may have your own darkness or you may share the same darkness as me
If this is so I will not pity you for this is not what you need
All these things I say belong to me I never really wanted them but they are there and they always will be This is me This is who I am This is how I feel
Copyright ©
deadclown
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2006-06-26 17:57:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forever my Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 06:02:54 PM AEST (User
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for the first time i can say WHOA i really lied this so much emotion and great flow i think you are really good |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by EddieDean on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:28:18 PM AEST (User
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very powerful write man, full of deep dark emotion. I can feel where you're coming from.
nice write, keep em coming.
-Eddie Dean |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:53:40 PM AEST (User
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i know the feeling this is a good write u got a lot out |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 02:31:43 AM AEST (User
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Your emotions flow really well. No need for pity, for you have opened your heart in this poem. Poetry I feel is the gateway to an inquisitive mind, and you have let us share yours. Thank you. Sue x |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Davinah on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 05:30:34 AM AEST (User
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Fully understood.
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Re: Forever my Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by LifeFadingAway on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 06:30:00 AM AEST (User
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Great write, you really put your emotioins in it
I know the feeling, know what you mean |
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