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shadow of the blade
Contributed by
chaos78
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Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:44:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the shadow of the blade
is where my fate will be made
I no longer want to hold on
for my heart just to far gone
there nothing left to grab on to
and there no future to look forward to
the darkness is where I live
and I cant stand the pain that surround me
it make it so hard to breath
and these feeling are taking over me
they wont let me live to see
if there a way out the shadow of light
for the blade already did it job tonight
as it drips with my life
and I start to lose sight
I know this is not right
but there no will left to fight
so it must end tonight
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2006-06-26 22:44:31]
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Re: shadow of the blade
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:16:55 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written. I pray this is just good writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: shadow of the blade
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:56:42 PM AEST
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I agree with Emy there
i hope its only in writing |
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