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Knowledge is Key
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 09:12:07 AM in AEST
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And the sting that was felt
you will never ever know
The tears dropped inside (as to not show)
And the finality of your words
was all that was heard
Precisely the time when reality blurred
And just like that we were through-
because in that statement we became
The residual effect of a love untamed
And in that moment was defined you and I
so this is why we could never ever be
The answer is simple: You aren't meant for me.
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2006-06-27 09:12:07]
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 06:05:29 PM AEST
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Well said scorpy!! I love the last stanza. So
much clarity in your words, hunni!
And you are soooooooo right. [knowledge after the
fact]. Life is a cruel teacher, no? She gives you the
test first and THEN teaches the lesson!!
[There's a name for instructors like that! lol]
Awesome post hun!
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:02:49 PM AEST
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But a test is to see, if its ALL passed. WHy fall into the semi, happiness.!>! If so, do you want just half a shirt, or a full.half a smile or frown......so a TEST is good.it shows, it wont have to happen when given........Because, you passed before it didnt unsusceed........Sad, and yes its life.but least you know.!
Hugs for the scorp.
Brew~ |
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:32:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful write!
Yes after the fact the reality of how we are human. I think if we knew everything ahead of time though we wouldnt have many lessons and even less adventures. Hurtful as it is at times.
Nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 08:53:35 PM AEST
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Scorpy~
I think if we knew everything beforehand we wouldn't learn much from life would we. Life is full of lessons for us to face. It can be really cruel and hurtful at times. We pick ourselves up and go on.
Such sadness and pain penned by a wounded heart. Chin up sweetheart, you're a fighter. The outcomes of past relations has made u a very strong and determined woman. May you find a special person who shall erase all those painful wounds that harbour in ur heart and fill it up with love, joy and happiness instead. Wishing you the best of everything my dear special friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 09:52:28 PM AEST
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sometimes we're better off for having lived that moment..no matter how harsh~
well written - as always
better days to you Scorp~
Yours..
Billy |
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 09:27:55 PM AEST
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(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( Scorperiffic ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Quite a powerful and thought provoking poem ya got here. I also find myself relating to this one very much. You know why. :-)
Always love the way you can dish it out, Scorpendous!!!!!
But am also sorry for the pain that seem to invoke this write.
*huge ulTIMate hug* :-)
Me
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:12:39 PM AEST
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This write reminds me of something I wrote once ages ago…when I cared. .lol…and something I feel about something or other on a daily basis…the answer always seems to be…***** it….
Nice write
Sorry my comment sucks
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 12:37:39 PM AEST
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You know, if we knew everything before hand - we wouldn't experience any of the bad things that we do, but you know, we wouldn't get any of those surprise good experiences either. It's a win lose situation. There''s going to be pluses and negatives to everything, you just have to push through the bad and know your better than letting it get to you, even though, it's unhelpable sometimes. But that's ok. Cause you don't need to be afraid to cry, because everyone does scorpy, it''s ok to have that moment of weakness and realize that hey you know this didn't work out, but you've also got to realize that there's a lot better out there, and that you've still got a lot more experiences, good and bad, to experience. But I've got to say scorpz - I've missed your writing. And you know, you''re going to find the right one. Someone who's worth the tears you'll cry and someone who you won''t be pressed to not cry in front of - if that makes sense. Any guy who can't see how great you are, doesn't deserve you, so - chin up scorpy. There''s better things ahead. Gotta rise above and smile - but know you have people to talk to that care about you - AND... if for some reason you want revenge, you can always slash his tires =D can't say that wouldn't make you feel better can you? lol Another great write scorpz, glad to have you back n writing.
-Cassy |
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 01:55:37 PM AEST
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| sigh...it's the sad truth that we learn more through pain than happiness. I wish it were not so. I am very impressed! |
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 10:19:12 PM AEST
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This is a gem of soul meets pen. As a Hallow's Eve born there is direct transmission for me on how data becomes fact maturing to knowledge and wisdom all of an emotional plane in determined difference between a soul mate and a life-mate.
Bravo
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Knowledge is Key
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 10:21:36 PM AEST
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The simple truth of relationships for all of us. The lessons are truly what it is all about.
An enlightening read with truth and wisdom and even acceptance. Well done. |
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