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WHEN WILL YOU RELIZE

Contributed by unwanted on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 09:50:39 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



WHEN WILL YOU RELIZE

And here u go leaving me, as ur by my side. will u say goodbye, i will because i know ur leaving me. but will u ever come back, will u ever come and see me, will u ever visit. are u gone forever, till death to us part, will u miss me or will u forget me. i will never forget my dad but i wanna forget u.

How many times will i cry for my dad and relize he's gone, that he's not coming. how many times. how many times will i look for u and relize ur not there. how many times will i need ur help and relize u can't help me. will u relize.

will u relize i'm not there when money is in ur pocket. will u relize i'm not there when u don't hear the word dad anymore. will u relize i'm not there when u don't hear my voice anymore. will u relize i'm not there when no one makes fun of ur gray hairs. will u relize i'm not there when u find my room totally clean. will u relize? i will , i will relize everytime i look at something that reminds me of my dad. will u? will u relize?will u care? care enough to change back, for me? or will u just forget me, not care, let me vanish into nothingness and be forever forgotten.




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Re: WHEN WILL YOU RELIZE (User Rating: 1 )
by hotrod55 on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:33:45 PM AEST
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all i can say is wow its really heart felt.




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