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decomposing love
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 09:50:50 AM in AEST
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I watch as you lie there,
innocently still,
I touch your face,
but its still warm
free from deaths sweet chill.
One last time,I kiss your cheek,
run my hands through your hair.
I wait for you to wake up,
but its true, nobody's there.
your glasslike eyes fix mine,
as if to ask me, why?
I never wanted this to happen,
why did you have to die?
it was no gun that killed you
no sharpened blade
it was just me, on my own,
and the stupid mistakes I made.
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2006-06-27 09:50:50]
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Re: decomposing love
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by Aeris030388 on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 05:22:53 AM AEST
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| This is beautifully written. It reminds me somewhat of the Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet. Well done. -Roxanne. |
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