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The Night
Contributed by
White_Raven
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 02:39:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the dark is where I creep,
During daylight is when I sleep,
Crying loudly to the moon,
warning you of your doom,
Claws slashing the ground as I run,
Oh what joy, so much fun,
Fangs snap here and there,
do you see me?
I'm everywhere,
Darkness hides me from you,
I am completley out of view,
But do not be scared,
I don't bite,
Not inlease you want a fight
The night surrounds me and you,
I am not scared,
but how about you?
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White_Raven
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2006-06-27 14:39:24]
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Re: The Night
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by hotrod55 on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:25:37 PM AEST
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| cool and in some strange way, sexy |
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Re: The Night
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by Anesthetic on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:40:00 PM AEST
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| good write. . . . . . . i liked it. |
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Re: The Night
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2008 @ 01:43:17 PM AEST
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Good write. I enjoyed the rhythm of it. The ending was cute.
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