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Walk Severed
Contributed by
wakegurl77
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A Summer so bright
So musical
So perfect
With an idealistic
Dream swirling
In the humidity
They walk together
Hand and hand
Down this alley of a street
But something stands silently between
Like a razor splitting a tie at the seam
A Distance of thousands of miles
A Distance of the widest sky
The Distance of time
Severing the bond
Between lovers
Brought together
For one simple summer
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2006-06-27 22:16:16]
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Re: Walk Severed
(User Rating: 1 )
by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:51:44 PM AEST
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| nice poem... it was simple yet had strong feeling to it. |
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