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Drew
Contributed by
gabby521
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Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 12:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Secrets don't make friends
And lies will only buy you time
I've come to realize once again
That what we had was only mine
That Love can only torture me
In working out it's spite
And will not rest til it has all of me
And I'm losing sleep again at night
It doesn't dare to bother you
Somehow only I can feel this pain
And since you could not follow through
I guess that I'll still take the blame
Selflessness will only bring you down it seems
While selfish hearts are happy for a time
And I'll still rely on what once were our dreams
Until Love decides that it needn't lie
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gabby521
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2006-06-28 12:04:23]
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Re: Drew
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 08:37:58 PM AEST
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very nicely done!!!
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Re: Drew
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by Kimberlynn on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 02:12:39 PM AEST
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| This is good, also the one called 'Rachel' is too. It was an awnser to this poem. So when I read that one, I had to find this one. This is very well written. |
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