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Tears stream like a river
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 03:30:04 PM in AEST
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Tear stained were her eyes as she stood
in the eve of twilight
watching the stars in the night fade
Lonely was her heart
Such a travesty
All aching and empty
How her empty arms
Longed
Just to hold him
one more time.
Her shoulders trembled
And shook
As she fought to catch
Each breath she took
Tears flowing like a river
Blinding her eyes
Holding that crumbled letter
Written so long ago
The words are just words
And forever will be
Just
That.
A Heart broken
Nary
A Chance to forget
A Love thats left you shaken.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2006-06-28 15:30:04]
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Re: Tears stream like a river
(User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 01:50:03 AM AEST
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Please Would Any one Like to
Coment .
I need someone to comment on this write. I need to know that the you , the reader , get my meaning. An I'd like to hear what and how it makes you feel.
All coments Welcome..
Whisper
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Re: Tears stream like a river
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 05:22:42 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem, it's very deep. Reading this kind of makes me feel sad, like losing someone you love, but the ending kind of seems positive to me in a way. It leaves you shaken but you could overcome it. It's what I get out of it.
Take care.
Scott
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