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Lady and her iron heart
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
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Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:38:45 PM in AEST
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Simple mistakes
the ones that cloak calamities.
Watch yourself with him.
My lapses caused the ripple
which twisted, it fashioned,
it contorted into a title wave.
The swelling depressed
Question, another cloak?
Vigilance grows wearisome.
The seas arent so choppy
my heart now made of iron
my wisdom flourished.
Copyright ©
Lady_Daisy
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2006-06-28 23:38:45]
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Re: Lady and her iron heart
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:57:18 PM AEST
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simply beautiful work here, I enjoyed!
Michelle |
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Re: Lady and her iron heart
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 12:53:24 AM AEST
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This is beautiful... Very well done!
~D~ |
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Re: Lady and her iron heart
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by Benny14 on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 02:05:38 AM AEST
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| i really liked it, an almost sarcastic tone, very enjoyable, awesome job. |
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Re: Lady and her iron heart
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by evolon on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 10:18:34 AM AEST
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| im speachless, its an unexplained touch reading this, i love it |
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