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This Needs To Go
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 05:53:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I once knew a girl as beautiful as she was innocent
Holding hands we stumbled through love's highs and decadence
We could still be swimming, deeper inside each other's blue
But my tongue took over, unleashing hidden words so true
(SHE DIDN'T NEED THEM)
ADD ONE FOR REGRET - LET ME DWELL ON SOMETHING
I HAD ENOUGH - YET I LEFT WITH NOTHING
THIS USELESS EMOTION ALWAYS ******* CRIPPLES ME
IT NEEDS TO GO - THIS NEEDS TO GO
MY TIMELINE IS BENT INTO A SHAPE
YES, IT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER, BUT...
Oh ******* well
I've known a northern girl as out of place as she was poor
Eventually the line dispersed and I embraced the whore
We could still be curled, under the sheets inside the waste
But amidst the darkness, I took the tool and erased
(I COULDN'T STAND IT)
COUNT TWO FOR REGRET - THROW HER IN THE HEARSE
FIRST TIME'S DEBATED - THE SECOND'S WORSE
THIS USELESS EMOTION ALWAYS ******* CRIPPLES ME
IT NEEDS TO GO - THIS NEEDS TO GO
MY TIMELINE IS BENT INTO A SHAPE
YES, IT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER, BUT...
Oh ******* well
NAME THEM - INSIDE SCREAMS
FORFEITING COUNTLESS DREAMS
AGAIN COME THE MISTAKES
I'M SMOTHERED IN SELF-HATE
WHY DID I DO THAT ****?
OR DECIDE TO LEAVE IT?
I LAMENT COUNTLESS TIMES
BREAKING DOWN IN MY MIND
MY MENTAL CEMETERY
IS OVERRUN BY ZOMBIES
REFUSING TO BE BURIED
THEY KILL WHAT I AM LIVING
GREIVE... GREIVE
Holding...
Holding...
Holding...
Why am I holding on to all this pain?
Copyright ©
sicknivesevered
... [
2006-06-29 17:53:47]
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Re: This Needs To Go
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by Lucid_Tides on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 06:55:19 PM AEST
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| Good emotional writing. Anger and anguish. Good write, I feel it belongs in a metal song. Awesome. |
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Re: This Needs To Go
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by midnight_writer on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 08:23:37 PM AEST
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such sadness...and then such anger!
i love the emotions in this...
x-Midnight~Amaya-x |
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Re: This Needs To Go
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 07:28:04 AM AEST
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This was amazing. I love your poetry. This was sad and then it just had so much anger in it. It was truely an amazing poem.
Take care
Christina |
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