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Judgement
Contributed by
Anesthetic
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Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 09:36:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The power you think you have
The power of judgement
It is not your own
The power is over you alone
The voices the names
We are all the same
In the mirror you see perfection
Not beauty but your soul
The skin helps to fool
But looks are not your only tool
Your mirror is a distortion
The real you is but a small portion
But still you do judge
As though you were king
Like everyone will believe its true
do you really think they have no clue
Judge the men judge the dogs do
They are all more human then you
As the people around you fade
Question their loyalty
How dare they defy you the judge
All that they say its lies that stuff
Your friends must have been bad all along
You just keep judging singing the same old song
The power you have
Has left you alone
With no family or friend
The fragile relationships brake and never mend
With no one for your judgement to touch
You find it all horribly to much
Step down from your pedistal
Afraid of there judgement
Make yourself lower still
And over your bad thoughts do mill
Its your medicine that your tasting
It shows you the life you were wasting
Lower then a dog
You feed yourself on slurps
The slurps of judgement you can find
Any little thought of being unkind
You lost all in you that was humain
Now in this world you stay as a stain
A smudge of dirt
A soulless monster
In the mirror you see perfection
In the mirror i see your reflection
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Anesthetic
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Re: Judgement
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 04:55:02 PM AEST
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108 reads and not a single comment? that should be a crime. very nice write, i totally get where you're coming from, and i am so glad it didn't sound like some unit from a health class. i'm gonna have to read more.
--talli
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