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The Rain
Contributed by
bluestars
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Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 01:58:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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As I sit here watching the rain
fall from my window
I find myself remembering about our past.
I start to remember about all the times
I cried for you,
and how my dreams of you and me
did not last.
The rain was just like my tears,
tears that you never swept away.
I was scared of you leaving me alone some day,
I fear I no longer have today.
I now know that after the rain
there is always a rainbow,
with that rainbow comes a clear blue sky.
The rain has stopped
the wounds have healed,
pain is no longer what I feel.
I will no longer be blinded by your lies,
I now have someone who will stand by my side.
Someone who has no feelings to hide,
feelings you never cared to show,
and that is why I had to let you go.
Copyright ©
bluestars
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2006-06-30 01:58:09]
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Re: The Rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 08:44:51 AM AEST
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I have 2 admit i loved the tittle cause i love the rain but now i read the poem it was realy
a culmination of mix emotions. Hope all is better in your life, i see it gets better at the end. Nice continuity 2 your writting and very honest and revealing. In time all will be much
better. Splendid work you pen.
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Re: The Rain
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by chaos78 on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 03:55:29 PM AEST
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| good work i truly enjoyed the read |
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Re: The Rain
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 04:25:43 AM AEST
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| So glad you have someone who cares now, beautiful poem xx |
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