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Give and Take ! Well, Maybe
Contributed by
jerseysue
on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 03:56:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Give me strength ,when I am weak,
Give me courage, when I speak,
Give me hope, for mine is gone,
Give me reasons to live on,
Take my heart, and my soul,
Take my body, make it whole,
Take my emotions, for they sleep,
Take my love ,its yours to keep,
Maybe I am looking for a dream,
Maybe he doesn't exist it seems,
Maybe one day our lives will combine,
Maybe one day this man will be mine.
Well we all live in hope !!
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Re: Give and Take ! Well, Maybe
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by poet_in_waiting on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 07:40:49 AM AEST
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i love it .. a simple poeticly powerful plea.
cheers
sean |
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Re: Give and Take ! Well, Maybe
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 10:03:24 AM AEST
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keep on dreaming...
Shari |
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Re: Give and Take ! Well, Maybe
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 12:57:31 AM AEST
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I know I've said this before but you have an excellent way of making your poems flow.
This poem is very touching.
I have to admit, your optimism is a bit contagious. You are right, of course, "we all live in hope".
Thank you for a very enjoyable read and yep, 'tis nice to keep hoping and dreaming like this.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Give and Take ! Well, Maybe
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by midian on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 05:00:35 AM AEST
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| Powerful and inspirational lovely write |
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