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invisable
Contributed by
lilmom101
on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 06:26:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I spoke to you
awakeing with an image of your face.
is this ok to feel?
you are far away.
will we ever see the day?
i am with another.
sometimes he yells and screams.
happiness is what seems.
i want a life in a picture.
a family with meals at the table.
my thoughts collide with right and wrong.
i wonder if it was you all along
do i ignore these thoughts.
or do i tell you and be untrue.
fear of not knowing
is your life a lie to i?
where is this going?
Poor white girl lost to a world.
Lost to a life .
where is her end?
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2006-06-30 06:26:20]
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Re: invisable
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 08:44:28 PM AEST
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A very nice write expressing hope along with longing in a quest between frienship and love
very poetic style u have easy 2 read. nicely
done . . .
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