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I Bleed
Contributed by
chaos78
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Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 11:26:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It keeps calling my name
Im so ashamed
stuck in this pain
as the blood leaves my veins
how can I explain
when Im no longer sane
trap by the pain
as the blood leaves my veins
who do I call
my back is to the wall
as the tears start to fall
I called on he for I had believe
he can set this mind free
but my faith did not
take me to that place
as the blood leaves me
so I answer the call
my blood is all gone
my soul has move on
I cant right this wrong
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chaos78
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2006-07-01 11:26:07]
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Re: I Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 01:00:46 PM AEST
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i love this. i love dark poetry..and poems that rhyme. this is sooo awesome. i can feel the pain, the emotion...awesome.
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Re: I Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 06:41:13 PM AEST
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Imprisoned by deep emotion a most forcefull
and compelling write you have here, never
ending in it's relentlessness. Nice work from
the dark side.
Ben |
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