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Maybe The Traveler
Contributed by
candysears
on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 08:13:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The soul left here to
Wander
Through all, darken hall
Ways seem to reign in
Salty waters trances
Black pearls, lace, filled
The way of the traveler
As he descend..
False dreams, hope of
Tomorrow day,
Traveling through the
Hollow cave space,
Travelers haunted by
This obscure route,
Pondering round to find
Their way..
Before the tide of sadness
Deny all beautiful dreams
Spill all forms of hope,
To wander through such
Beautiful fantasy,
But that of,
Black lace, pearls top the
Mountain peak..
The water murmuring as
Sad waters briskly run..
Where know man could
Travel..
The salty tears just drip
Till all airway spaces
Trapped..
As the sad waters
Run..
The soul left here to
Wander
As creatures of the
Night,
To say good-bye to
A world without a
Dream,
Nor hope,
Neither light, nor beauty
The traveler sad lonely,
Dare not to ponder..
As he travel through the
Cave,
Hollow black spaces,
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candysears
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2006-07-01 20:13:37]
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Re: Maybe The Traveler
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 04:22:46 AM AEST
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| Its so sad but so beautiful, you are very talented.... xx |
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Re: Maybe The Traveler
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:59:05 AM AEST
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How sad would that be to not have a dream, hope or light. So pain stakely aweful, sad & lonely. Darkness fills this write. Very well penned. May His light always shine so brightly for u my friend.
hugs galore,
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Re: Maybe The Traveler
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 07:21:55 PM AEST
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right off the bat the tittle was endearing, reminded of yesteryear in my home town a little off the beaten path that took me in to the woods and the salty waters trances i saw the sea great imagery and lovely concept 4 a dark poem it was a candle in the dark. nice,
very nice.
Ben |
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