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No more
Contributed by
bluestars
on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 01:00:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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No more smiles,
no more sun
No more bright days,
filled with fun.
No more kisses,
no more laughter
No more "We'll live
happily ever after."
No more you,
no more me.
No more tears
of misery.
No more secrets,
and no more lies.
All I have to do now
is say goodbye.
Copyright ©
bluestars
... [
2006-07-02 01:00:19]
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Re: No more
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 02:56:49 AM AEST
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| nicely done! i can complete relate with this poem. it says so much in in a simple and efective manner! great write! |
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Re: No more
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:32:13 AM AEST
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| very sad, but very sweet as well, good write |
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Re: No more
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 09:55:35 AM AEST
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| Short and straight to the point. Liked it. |
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Re: No more
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 06:21:14 AM AEST
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Eve~
Straight to the point ,so little words can say so much. Sometimes things don't turn out the way we want them too. Look ahead to the future dearest Eve~ May u find the love and happiness ur heart deserves.
big warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: No more
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 01:03:37 AM AEST
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As always a most touching peice of poetic sadness beautifuly written with such deep emotion attached with each letter and word, your work is convicing as well as beautiful.
Ben ***** 4Eve |
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